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I wrote this in 2003...

...and a lot of people seemed to like it for some reason. Personally I think it could use some updating, which is why I'm storing it here for now. In storage but on display. Think of it as a "demo version." UPDATE: I've edited it a bit and have a second draft now. The edited version is directly below and the original version is underneath the edited version and italicized. float away catch a star on your way let it expire in a fury of light that once was so small to those far away yet now it fills the sky and when you show us that we'll cry but we'll know that love never dies we'll hug in great numbers and take home reminders of all that we have and we'll know know that best friends forever is more than just a cute catchy phrase know that the words we say are more than just words and we'll say them with more conviction than ever and we'll cry but these tears will be the happy kind the kind that come from community from words spoken with sin